Fear Factor challenge ( plan and Intro )

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks the reader in.
2. Body Paragraph 1	How Mr Goodwin introduced fear factor.
3. Body Paragraph 2	Describing the contestants feelings before eating.
4. Body Paragraph 3	How Just it was another one of Mr Goodwin’s tricks.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the fear factor challenge.

The Fear Factor is coming to room 6 in Point England school. 4 contestants will go head to head in a series of

stuff that no humans have ever eaten. They will drink stuff that they have never drinked. This is the next fear

Factor. This morning get out of bed and on tv start watching it.

Advice to James abel

Walt: think critically about what we read.

L&P Chocolate NOT MY TYPE !

WALT:use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.

Food Review

Whitaker white chocolate and L&P Chocolate do not go together it taste yuck, it taste like I’m going to spew on my Chromebook it is not my type have chocolate.

The Whitaker's L&P chocolate is white and has a grizzling taste. the king bite L&P chocolate is only available at the supermarket for only $4.30. the product contains fresh dairy milk and taste like popping candy.

When i first tasted the chocolate I just could not wait to swallow the L&P chocolate it tasted like i was eating and drinking oranges and milk at the same time it was well below standard. It looked in shape like a big square block. It also smelt like Cold egg coated L&P straight from the fridge. It felt like squishing a egg yauk out have it’s shell it was melting in my hand. I could barely taste a thing by that popping taste i would never want to taste it ever again.

If I was making the L&P Chocolate first improvement i will to the chocolate will be take the L&P popping taste and add in rocky road crumb and add Vanilla ice cream. i will change the chocolate colour to brown and add sprinkles to pretty it up and i will lower the price. It will be yum.

I would not recommend eating L&P chocolate because it might not be suitable for your age. You guys might like it but not me, My rate is 3 out of 10 ⚽⚽⚽.

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We were learning to rite a review using language that paints a picture in the mind of the reader. I have written a review of when I ate Whitaker's L&P chocolate. Take a look. 

My epic game journey

WALT: make our own board game
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In the past 1 month we have been waiting to play our own group board game. After making the board games We had finally we had
got to play our own game it was fun and quiet cool.

Inez        Omari

Heather           Talita

Olivia            Moroni

                                  Adriel

  

CLICK Here to get the link for rules of the game ( PAUA shells planning doc

Winter Is Coming to Auckland be Aware !!!!

Walt: write a news style report

Winter Is Coming to Auckland !!!!

Winter !!!!!!!!!!!!

Winter is coming Adults command the school principal to close schools on rainy day.

Winter is coming to Auckland so be aware. Don’t be in the rain winter is one have the coldest season ever you can get sick easily.

Winter is cool but you can be cold.

Winter is snowy most of the times (Just make snowman after the rain) , stay out of the rain and you will be fine. That’s why Always come to school on rainy days with spare uniforms shoes and sock (raincoats) Are recommended for kids.

Pt England school student can be affected by the rain. Some ways Pt England students can be Affected is by getting the flu.

                                     Interview

Adam A Pt England student who likes to read books says

“ we we should not have school on rainy days” he says because we will get sick and might end up into a flu, While on the other hand Danielle a friend of mine who likes to play soccer says “ School should be open because We can still learn and have fun. Danielle has told me some tip here they go you could put extra raincoats and an umbrella that won’t buckle in the rain.

Today we learnt how to write a cold winter news style report.

Now I know to put myself in the story only if I'm not writing.

Problem solving 4

Walt: solve problems using multiplication and division strategies

Today me and my group have done a presentation working out this
equation can you try to work out we were learning to
solve times and division strategies.

Mubashshir All word classes

WALT: We are learning how to identify different word classes using photos.

Today we where learning how to identify new words for 4 photos
Using Determiner, adjective, verb and adverb. Have you ever
Done this Activity?  

Muba's Wii -u Advice

WALT : find proof of the authors message.

Today we had got a letter from Brendon he had bought him a Nintendo Wii-U console and
does not know what game to buy so my advice presentation is about  helping people with there
problems. On top of the discription.

Christchurh Earthquake Interview

WALT: find proof of the authors message.

Interview

Story: Virtual Liam

Character: Liam

The boys name is Li-am and is 12 years old. He lives in Auckland.

Liam How do you feel about the 2011 Christchurch earthquake?

I feel so sad and sorry for the peoples loss in New Zealand Christchurch.

Liam how would you feel if an earthquake hit in your country?

I won’t have any computer games to play, Water, Food or clothes 
I will just sit and wait for medical help.

Liam how they would react in an earthquake?  

I would drop cover and roll before I even hear a earthquake .

The three weird pigs

WALT Write a report

By: mubashshir
Date: 13/5.2015

                                 Three little pigs !

Two little pigs recently sent out of home, have been murdered and their houses destroyed in candyland. But luckily the third little pig has managed to Survive

the attack.

The first little pigs made a house of  Straws unfortunately this was no match for the wolfs powerful puff, and wild the wolf huffed and puffed he blew the straw house away, then killed him. The second pig with his house of sticks, met the same fate as his brother, the wolf blew his house away and ate him up too.

The third little pig luckily survived the death he had made the strongest house of  all, he had made a brick house enough to get the wolf to be tired of puffing. After the wolf got really tired and went on the roof, 3 little pig knew so he set hot water on the chimney and when the Wolf fell he died from the hot water.

mummy pigs interview

Mummy pig why did u say three little pigs when u said they have grown ?

Because when they were little i called them little pig and now they are humongous .

what is your name mummy pig and why don’t the other people let them go when they are big want to send them out?

Well my name is claus and  they never listen to me so i kicked them out. They never do what I say, the all ways fight.

New fruit tech

Newest fruit technology 2015

Posted on 30th April 9.50am

Posted by: Mubashshir Shafil

Today the 30th of April at Pt England School, Auckland, Mr Goodwin the teacher of room 6 explained to the class about the newest fruit technology it is called makey makey. Mr goodwin Set it up and we watched as how Mr Goodwin played tetris with the little controller. This makey makey kit is based on our term 2 topic for tinkering tools and toys. It can sometimes be fun & cool. Have you got makey makey kit in your school !

Today we were told to write about our current  report article. We looked at different article. Our teacher told us about our makey makey and we had to write about it.
WALT write a lead paragraph of a news report

Manipulating sentence structures

WALT we are learning how to manipulate sentence structures for more effect

The fat hippo relaxes gladly

The fat hippo gladly relaxes 

Gladly relaxes the fat hippo

Relaxes gladly the fat hippo

problem solving 2

Today we had to do a problem solving sheet 
here is what it has said  try to work it out

Mr Jacobson is putting the chairs out for the big assembly.

He puts 4 rows of chairs in the breeze for parents, and 3 rows of chairs down the sides for teachers.

If each row of chairs has 8 chairs in it, how many parents and teachers can Mr Jacobson fit in assembly?

My game poster

ANAZAC

W.A.L.T learn about the Anzacs
Today we had our Anzac Assembly. We had to go through our normal assembly and then  at last we went  to our own war memorial field of remembrance to remember the people 
that went to war. Did you know were the britans go is were we go

Discription: Today we had to write one paragraph about the Anzac Assembly.

Immersion Assembly Term 2

First my class and I sat down in the hall and then a pretend helicopter was being Flied by Issa salli one of the prefects it had to have a lot of space. And Also the teachers and prefects started handing out yummy treats like a ham sandwich and carrot sticks. We had been waiting for ages it was fun

After a wild Mr Burt called the 2 Nd item up it was team 2 item about Winnie the pooh. Team 2 had a little movie about Winnie and Tiger making donkey a little shelter house once Winnie the pooh had made the shelter they called donkey and showed it to him, he really liked his new shelter. After the movie had finished the team 2 teachers had come up to the stage and made donkey the same house.

After All the other team items Mr Barks came up and started talking about Hover boards. He talked for a long long time till he introduced his own minion hover board. After a 5 minutes He called up Mr Somerville to come and try it since he really wanted to fly so he sat him on the minions face and got a leaf blower and put in a whole and off the hero went zooming through the stage.

I think our new school topic is interesting, Tinkering tools &  toys. I think Tinkering tools & toys is fun. It looks interesting and cool.

Hope you enjoy

Malamahonua ceromony

Today in the morning our school and all the other Manaiakalani Schools went to the Pt England reserve. Did you know it was the Hokulea that came in the morning so  we went over to them and 2,000 kids from all the  Manaiakalani schools had to welcome them to Pt England by singing a chant. Did you know that The Hokulea came from hawaii So they traveled 40,000 miles That has been a long way. After we sang the chant 8 times and then they said some speeches and we sang some maori songs. And then they had more speeches after our Waiatas. The last thing we did was shake hands and said welcome.

problem solving

Year 5&6 camp 2015 25 anniversary

YEAR 5 & 6 camp

Did you know that last week We had our Year 5 and 6 camp,It was awesome. Year 5 and 6 camp happens every year where every kids gets an opportunity  to sleep with their friends in a small tent. Have you ever gone on a school camp with your classmates?

At the Year 5 and 6 camp all the parent helpers and cooks were ready. We went for 3 days and 2 nights in the school field, In our tent we have 3 people, I had slept with Charles and Martin in the tent village. Camp is to help kids be responsible with their stuff and being brave to do everything.

Camp is fun you should realy go camp.!

My first highlight was kayaking  with my friend his name was Lomio-Lee Gatua me and him buddied up and went kayaking. But first we had to learn how kayak before we could even ride a kayak. So Mrs Garden told us some tips she said to paddle you have to keep your right and left hand as you are holding a motorbike handle, then she put life jackets on us and we partnered up with a person and kayaked we also had boundaries.

My second highlight  at camp was going to the Mangere pools on the last day, it was exciting. But first we had to clean our tent, pack our stuff, eat our breakfast, play some sport then we went on the bus to Mangare pools. When we got to Mangere pools we sat down and the teacher gave us fruit and we sang some mihis, after we went in to the poolside and had our morning tea I was full then we had to get changed into our togs and we swam. After swimming the whole day we were all tired we sat on the bus and we all had a good time swimming.

I think camp is for everyone. It is fun and exciting when you do a lot of activities at camp. 2468 who do we appreciate Not the king not the queen it's all about the true crew.


Mr Goodwin told us to write about our camp. So what me and my classmates did was we had write a detailed recount with hook and orientation. In our recount we had to write a Introduction, 1 paragraph was to write evry detail about camp. In the second paragraph we had to write about our first highlight. In our 3 paragraph we had to write about our second highlight. and last but not least our conclusion about how you felt about camp and what it means for the future.

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Newspaper tower

WALT write a detailed introduction with hook

Guess what, today Mr Goodwin told us to make a  newspaper tower he said the one with the longest tower will get a prize . I was nervous because the  tower had to be tall and stand by itself I wanted the prize. Has Your teacher ever told you to make a paper Tower  before

First what  we did was get into our literacy class then Mr Goodwin said “ today your challenge  is to make a paper tower with in”. So What we did was get 5 people in a group. The Materials needed were a scissor, 5 and a ½ sheets of paper and a little bit of duct tape.

Making time, What we did first was get the paper and roll it up then I did was get duct tape and stick it on the rolled paper. After that we put the rolled Newspaper it inside another rolled newspaper. After  A  wild we started to joint the rolls altogether then it broke, I was panicking then we only had 15 seconds to finish it off. Mr Goodwin said “ times up”.

After a wild it was judging time My group  lost and another group lost as well. We were left with two teams, Rosalina  and cameo’s team were left Mr Goodwin not tell so one person went and got a ruler and measured it and cameos team one.

I think doing challenges are fun like making a paper tower and making chicken noodles. Doing challenges help you writ more story with imagination.