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Food Review
Whitaker white chocolate and L&P Chocolate do not go together it taste yuck, it taste like I’m going to spew on my Chromebook it is not my type have chocolate.
The Whitaker's L&P chocolate is white and has a grizzling taste. the king bite L&P chocolate is only available at the supermarket for only $4.30. the product contains fresh dairy milk and taste like popping candy.
When i first tasted the chocolate I just could not wait to swallow the L&P chocolate it tasted like i was eating and drinking oranges and milk at the same time it was well below standard. It looked in shape like a big square block. It also smelt like Cold egg coated L&P straight from the fridge. It felt like squishing a egg yauk out have it’s shell it was melting in my hand. I could barely taste a thing by that popping taste i would never want to taste it ever again.
If I was making the L&P Chocolate first improvement i will to the chocolate will be take the L&P popping taste and add in rocky road crumb and add Vanilla ice cream. i will change the chocolate colour to brown and add sprinkles to pretty it up and i will lower the price. It will be yum.
I would not recommend eating L&P chocolate because it might not be suitable for your age. You guys might like it but not me, My rate is 3 out of 10 ⚽⚽⚽.
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We were learning to rite a review using language that paints a picture in the mind of the reader. I have written a review of when I ate Whitaker's L&P chocolate. Take a look.
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