L&P Chocolate NOT MY TYPE !

WALT:use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.

Food Review

Whitaker white chocolate and L&P Chocolate do not go together it taste yuck, it taste like I’m going to spew on my Chromebook it is not my type have chocolate.

The Whitaker's L&P chocolate is white and has a grizzling taste. the king bite L&P chocolate is only available at the supermarket for only $4.30. the product contains fresh dairy milk and taste like popping candy.

When i first tasted the chocolate I just could not wait to swallow the L&P chocolate it tasted like i was eating and drinking oranges and milk at the same time it was well below standard. It looked in shape like a big square block. It also smelt like Cold egg coated L&P straight from the fridge. It felt like squishing a egg yauk out have it’s shell it was melting in my hand. I could barely taste a thing by that popping taste i would never want to taste it ever again.

If I was making the L&P Chocolate first improvement i will to the chocolate will be take the L&P popping taste and add in rocky road crumb and add Vanilla ice cream. i will change the chocolate colour to brown and add sprinkles to pretty it up and i will lower the price. It will be yum.

I would not recommend eating L&P chocolate because it might not be suitable for your age. You guys might like it but not me, My rate is 3 out of 10 ⚽⚽⚽.

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We were learning to rite a review using language that paints a picture in the mind of the reader. I have written a review of when I ate Whitaker's L&P chocolate. Take a look. 

My epic game journey

WALT: make our own board game
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In the past 1 month we have been waiting to play our own group board game. After making the board games We had finally we had
got to play our own game it was fun and quiet cool.

Inez        Omari

Heather           Talita

Olivia            Moroni

                                  Adriel

  

CLICK Here to get the link for rules of the game ( PAUA shells planning doc

My Amazing superhero writing

WALT:  write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favourite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If I was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min.

I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because

it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favorite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If i was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min. I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

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Today we learnt how to write effective paragraph's using juicy word's. Me and my class had to write about our favourite super power's, my favourite super power was speed I chose speed because it is fun and cool. At the end of our writing session we had to partner up my partner is Omari then what we did each others and was read each others writing , after that we had been given a rubric witch is on the top we had to mark each others.

What we learnt was to write juicy words by refracting with a partner  Here is a link to Wikipedia all about speed https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Speed.

Rubric by : Omari