Fear Factor challenge ( plan and Intro )

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks the reader in.
2. Body Paragraph 1	How Mr Goodwin introduced fear factor.
3. Body Paragraph 2	Describing the contestants feelings before eating.
4. Body Paragraph 3	How Just it was another one of Mr Goodwin’s tricks.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the fear factor challenge.

The Fear Factor is coming to room 6 in Point England school. 4 contestants will go head to head in a series of

stuff that no humans have ever eaten. They will drink stuff that they have never drinked. This is the next fear

Factor. This morning get out of bed and on tv start watching it.

L&P Chocolate NOT MY TYPE !

WALT:use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.

Food Review

Whitaker white chocolate and L&P Chocolate do not go together it taste yuck, it taste like I’m going to spew on my Chromebook it is not my type have chocolate.

The Whitaker's L&P chocolate is white and has a grizzling taste. the king bite L&P chocolate is only available at the supermarket for only $4.30. the product contains fresh dairy milk and taste like popping candy.

When i first tasted the chocolate I just could not wait to swallow the L&P chocolate it tasted like i was eating and drinking oranges and milk at the same time it was well below standard. It looked in shape like a big square block. It also smelt like Cold egg coated L&P straight from the fridge. It felt like squishing a egg yauk out have it’s shell it was melting in my hand. I could barely taste a thing by that popping taste i would never want to taste it ever again.

If I was making the L&P Chocolate first improvement i will to the chocolate will be take the L&P popping taste and add in rocky road crumb and add Vanilla ice cream. i will change the chocolate colour to brown and add sprinkles to pretty it up and i will lower the price. It will be yum.

I would not recommend eating L&P chocolate because it might not be suitable for your age. You guys might like it but not me, My rate is 3 out of 10 ⚽⚽⚽.

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We were learning to rite a review using language that paints a picture in the mind of the reader. I have written a review of when I ate Whitaker's L&P chocolate. Take a look. 

conjunction task

WALT:  We are learning about conjunctions and how to use them in sentences.

Basic conjunctions

Conjunctions join two parts of a sentence and help to show the connection between the two parts of the sentence.

and tells you more

Here are examples of conjunctions you can use in your sentences:

Task One  

• We went home and went straight to bed.

• They are rich but they aren’t happy.

• We went home because we were tired.

• We went home early, so we missed the end of the concert.

• We went home when Jane wanted to.

• We went home before the concert ended.

• We went home after Max Jones had sung his first song.

• We went home although / though we did not really want to.

• We will go home if we are tired.

Task Two

if	but	although	because	unless
while	after	when	only if	since

e.g - Gene can go to school because he’s not sick anymore

Gene can go to school Because he had come back from his holiday.

Lena has a sore foot but it was not sore anymore.

Katareina won’t be going to the movies only if her mum lets her go.

Sione can ride his bike if he is a good boy.

Sally climbed a tree while playing teggy.

Kyle walked home from school since 3.00pm to 5.00pm.

Simon was full from dinner unless he wanted more.

Anna watched her sister when she was playing soccer.

Scott was in charge after mum and dad went shopping.

Shelley played ripper rugby although she had forgot to play

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Description of learning:  Today we were learnt all about conjunctions.
Conjunctions are words like and, but. Conjunctions also make up two sentences to
make one. take a look at our activity that we did. enjoy.

Bean bag for hire LTD time

WALT pursued the reader to agree with our message.

Bean bags for hire

Bean bags are comfortable and warm to sit on, enjoy what bean bags has to offer.

During class time the comfortable bean bags are available for hire to sit on and enjoy. Instead of sitting on the hard damp floor and getting back pain or on a chair where it has broken legs and not much comfort, you will be able to sit on the bean bag to do your work only for 3pt.

The bean bags are filled with soft relaxing beans and covered in a rubber skin bag. They can be moulded into the shape of your body so you won’t have any back pain. You can choose to sit on the comfortable bean bags, or use it to lean your back on if you're tired.

The relaxing bean bags come in two different colours. A light sky and ocean blue type, and a green nature and lettuce colour . It’s your choice which of  the comfort bean bag  you want to sit on.

The cheapest price is 3pt only for a limited time only. You pay 3pt once at the beginning of the day and then you can enjoy the beanbag for the rest of the day.

Remember for 3pt you can sit at a comfy beanbag during class time all day.

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Description of learing:  For this weeks task we had to re craft a piece of writing that we had to re craft it to make people persuaded into hiring bean bags.  the bean bags are only 3 pt the whole day. it is comfy and warm hire it now before it is out.

If I had a million dollars

Walt: write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had a million Dollars at the Mall

Intro

If I had a million Dollars at the mall it will be so awesome i could just grab anything i want to buy it without having to look at price tags, it will be a dream come true. I will buy a audi R8 and own a soccer field, buy  myself a mansion with my butler who will serve me. Million Dollars will be fun i because can travel anywhere you like.

Toyworld

If I had a million dollars and i had gone to toyworld i would get two nerf guns a mgp, a remote control helicopter with a waterproof camera that records what is happening in the air. A skateboard i will even buy a army force plane that is remote controlled. I will buy every single remote control cars, plane and helicopters for myself. I will just show off with my toys.

Footlocker

If i had a million Dollars and i had gone to foot locker i would probably buy the latest nike shoes. 10 vans, 8 converse, 15 nikes, 3 pumas, 5 adidas shoes and  3 of  the latest DC shoes. Also for my football gear i will buy 6 nike mercurial superfly boots, 3 nike tiempo legend and 4 nike hypervenom boots all just for me.

Rebel sport

If i had a million Dollars and I had to buy sports gear for my next football season I would go to the nike shop in botany and say i need “ 2 nike hypervenoms , 2 nike livenbro air breathable shin guards, a captain's armband and a adidas 2014 official brazuca ball and I will be jam packed enough ready for my game.

Conclusion

It could have been really really fun having a million dollars but however I had just been selfish and kept everything to myself I was not financially responsible. But if I did have A million dollars i will spend it on house bills, grocery, i will buy my mum and dad a new car, give them a new house and some money. And if if have got left over money I will give the rest of  the money to charity for clothes and food. It’s not like i’m going to buy 20 football boots 15 liven bro shin-guard and 3 captain armbands and buy ten vans that will be selfish! now that’s what you call financially responsible. 

My Amazing superhero writing

WALT:  write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favourite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If I was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min.

I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because

it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favorite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If i was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min. I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

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Today we learnt how to write effective paragraph's using juicy word's. Me and my class had to write about our favourite super power's, my favourite super power was speed I chose speed because it is fun and cool. At the end of our writing session we had to partner up my partner is Omari then what we did each others and was read each others writing , after that we had been given a rubric witch is on the top we had to mark each others.

What we learnt was to write juicy words by refracting with a partner  Here is a link to Wikipedia all about speed https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Speed.

Rubric by : Omari

Winter Is Coming to Auckland be Aware !!!!

Walt: write a news style report

Winter Is Coming to Auckland !!!!

Winter !!!!!!!!!!!!

Winter is coming Adults command the school principal to close schools on rainy day.

Winter is coming to Auckland so be aware. Don’t be in the rain winter is one have the coldest season ever you can get sick easily.

Winter is cool but you can be cold.

Winter is snowy most of the times (Just make snowman after the rain) , stay out of the rain and you will be fine. That’s why Always come to school on rainy days with spare uniforms shoes and sock (raincoats) Are recommended for kids.

Pt England school student can be affected by the rain. Some ways Pt England students can be Affected is by getting the flu.

                                     Interview

Adam A Pt England student who likes to read books says

“ we we should not have school on rainy days” he says because we will get sick and might end up into a flu, While on the other hand Danielle a friend of mine who likes to play soccer says “ School should be open because We can still learn and have fun. Danielle has told me some tip here they go you could put extra raincoats and an umbrella that won’t buckle in the rain.

Today we learnt how to write a cold winter news style report.

Now I know to put myself in the story only if I'm not writing.

Problem solving 4

Walt: solve problems using multiplication and division strategies

Today me and my group have done a presentation working out this
equation can you try to work out we were learning to
solve times and division strategies.

Problem solving 3

Walt: solve problems using multiplication and division strategies


Today me and my group have done a presentation working out this
equation can you try to work out we were learning to
solve times and division strategies.

Mubashshir All word classes

WALT: We are learning how to identify different word classes using photos.

Today we where learning how to identify new words for 4 photos
Using Determiner, adjective, verb and adverb. Have you ever
Done this Activity?  

Muba's Wii -u Advice

WALT : find proof of the authors message.

Today we had got a letter from Brendon he had bought him a Nintendo Wii-U console and
does not know what game to buy so my advice presentation is about  helping people with there
problems. On top of the discription.

Christchurh Earthquake Interview

WALT: find proof of the authors message.

Interview

Story: Virtual Liam

Character: Liam

The boys name is Li-am and is 12 years old. He lives in Auckland.

Liam How do you feel about the 2011 Christchurch earthquake?

I feel so sad and sorry for the peoples loss in New Zealand Christchurch.

Liam how would you feel if an earthquake hit in your country?

I won’t have any computer games to play, Water, Food or clothes 
I will just sit and wait for medical help.

Liam how they would react in an earthquake?  

I would drop cover and roll before I even hear a earthquake .

The three weird pigs

WALT Write a report

By: mubashshir
Date: 13/5.2015

                                 Three little pigs !

Two little pigs recently sent out of home, have been murdered and their houses destroyed in candyland. But luckily the third little pig has managed to Survive

the attack.

The first little pigs made a house of  Straws unfortunately this was no match for the wolfs powerful puff, and wild the wolf huffed and puffed he blew the straw house away, then killed him. The second pig with his house of sticks, met the same fate as his brother, the wolf blew his house away and ate him up too.

The third little pig luckily survived the death he had made the strongest house of  all, he had made a brick house enough to get the wolf to be tired of puffing. After the wolf got really tired and went on the roof, 3 little pig knew so he set hot water on the chimney and when the Wolf fell he died from the hot water.

mummy pigs interview

Mummy pig why did u say three little pigs when u said they have grown ?

Because when they were little i called them little pig and now they are humongous .

what is your name mummy pig and why don’t the other people let them go when they are big want to send them out?

Well my name is claus and  they never listen to me so i kicked them out. They never do what I say, the all ways fight.

0.8 Nepal Earthquake Interview

W.A.L.T: find proof of the authors message.
Story: Level Ten

Character: Terry

Interview

Planning space

Write what details you know and can guess. eg. Age, Gender	13 years old, Terry, Video games, Does not want to sleep
What are their interests do you think?	Video Games
What country do you think they live in?	New Zealand, Wellington,Foxton,
Would their life have been affected by the earthquake in Nepal do you think?	Not really because he could have survived.
How might their lives have been affected if an earthquake hit in their city?	Might not have power or any food.
Is there anything that the character could do, or might do, to help the people in Nepal who have suffered from the earthquake?	Probably write a blog post to all international country’s. 40 hour famine

This is a boy called terry who is 13 years old who likes to plays games all the time.

He also lives in New Zealand,Wellington near foxton.

I think terry will do the 40 hour famine for Nepal. Do you know Anything terry could do ?

“ Terry what would you do if a Earthquake hit your country”?

I will tell everyone and inform that there is a Eathquake in our town

Are you going to help Nepal ?

Today we were told to Interview terry About The Nepal Earthquake, What would he do for Nepal and what would happen if it hit his country.