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Tuesday, 8 December 2015

Merry Christmas !!!! gif

Walt: make our own gif
















Description: Today We had to make A gif for Christmas. I had made one Above The Description
It only took us 30 minutes to make. Enjoy.








Friday, 4 December 2015

Problem Solving 40

Walt: figure out which of our problem strategies to use for different problems.

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Mubashshir survivor animatoin


muba survivor animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This Term our topic is Survivors I have made a Animation Above About A wolf Adapting In the desert , all he finds is water on the ground. How he adapts is by Having less layers of fur on his body. Incase you don’t know what adapting mean, It means A animal that eats food and drink water to survive and adapt in different seasons and weathers and have a healthy environment. Enjoy

Tuesday, 1 December 2015

Camp Bentzon

Walt: summarise a week long experience into a recount.

KAWAU ISLAND CAMP BENTZON
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By: Mubashshir
Away from home living on a island for four days. We are going to Kawau Island. We came to the hall and checked in for departure. We left at 7.30 and hopped on the bus and sat there doing nothing for 1 hour and 30 min till we got to Sandspit wharf.


When we got there we got off the bus and sat in our group lines and had morning tea. We played for about 10 minutes before it was our next departure to kawau island in a ferry. We got into a line and passed one bag at a time to get them packed away. At last we hopped on the ferry with the teachers and parent helpers. It took about 30 minutes to get to the island.


My most favourite activity was kayaking because I loved paddling kayaks. Once we learnt all the tips and instructions on how to not fall off your kayak we lifted the boat into the water, sat down in it and started paddling. We had been paddling for about 15 minutes till we got to another bay and it was called Stingray Bay. We played a game called kayak tag till we had to head back to shore. We were unlucky not to see any stingrays. That was amazing!


My next favourite activity was the confidence course. My dad and my team were there to cheer me on. I liked the confidence course because we could climb in different ways, use different techniques to get over different obstacles. I also liked the confidence course because everybody got to have a try at all the obstacles.

I really enjoyed going to camp because it was really fun. One thing I learnt was even if the activities you never tried make you nervous give it a try.


THE END
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Description: This week room six has been writing About there experience Kawau Island Camp Bentzon
I written a recount About My experience At Kawau Island.
                                                
                                       


 




Thursday, 29 October 2015

Friday, 23 October 2015

reasearching about Adaptation

     WALT: define Adaptation
What Does Adaptation Mean?The special characteristics that enable plants and animals to be successful in a particular environment are called
adaptations.

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My own words of adaptations

I think adaptation means A animal that eats food and drink water to 
survive and adapt in different seasons and weathers and have a healthy
enviroment 

Thursday, 22 October 2015

San Diego Intro 2

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Today Mr Goodwin said we are going to the San Diego zoo. But we didn't go to San Diego zoo, we actually went on a virtual tour of the zoo, which was kind of boring. Are there as many animals at the real 
zoo as their was on the zoo website?


Description:
Today we had written two paragraphs that hook the reader into our story.
We had written a complex sentence
a simple and a complex question.
hope you enjoy.




Friday, 16 October 2015

adaptation

WALT: research animals and their adaptation

Title: adaptation

Description:

My chosen animal is the camel. It can close it's eyes when it is going to be a sand storm. It has adapted to break through any bad sand weather. Camels can change there body temperature
when it is cold they can change the body temperature to warm and when it is hot they can change
the body temperature to cold. Hope you enjoy my animation soon.

Tropical Rainforest

Walt: summarise information into presentations.


Fear Factor challenge ( plan and Intro )

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks the reader in.
2. Body Paragraph 1
How Mr Goodwin introduced fear factor.
3. Body Paragraph 2
Describing the contestants feelings before eating.
4. Body Paragraph 3
How Just it was another one of Mr Goodwin’s tricks.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the fear factor challenge.

The Fear Factor is coming to room 6 in Point England school. 4 contestants will go head to head in a series of
stuff that no humans have ever eaten. They will drink stuff that they have never drinked. This is the next fear
Factor. This morning get out of bed and on tv start watching it.

Thursday, 15 October 2015

problem solving 28

Walt: try different solutions to solve multiplication problems

Friday, 25 September 2015

last blog

Hey fallow fans this is my last blog post for the term keep on checking my blog. later boh 

Wednesday, 23 September 2015

Onomatopoeia

WALT: We are learning to use onomatopoeia to help create interest in our writing.










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Today we had learnt about Onomatopoeia words and what Onomatopoeia means.
We had got sent to find images of Onomatopoeia and find to draw. I managed
to draw a Onomatopoeia boom  it was hard drawing it. hope you like the drawing
please leave a comment below.

Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Egg story recount


Yesterday we had gone out for an exciting race of egg races. We had each got a brown egg
and his name was Omariz JR we had time to draw his face before the race, I was so confused
that what was going on. Who knew that our teacher was about to tell us to do something weird.

Omariz JR was born on the 21st of september 2015 he was the weirdest egg child we had ever sawn. Omariz JR looked cool but one thing, He had a small face. big eyes small body He was just was not my type. We had got the name from Omari and mubz so we added it and it was Omariz JR Omariz JR had heaps of fun with me and Omari and I did to we the most fun ever with a egg!

When me and Omari first took Omariz JR to the playground I felt so nervous because he was so fragile. When we got our spoons we had to put him on the spoon and Omari had to compete with the other competitors. Omari had to go across the playground up and down he did well but then cracked the eggs bottom by running to me. Then it was my turn to take the egg back to the other side I had fast walked but luckily when I ran to the end I had not dropped it. Egg races are interesting and fun, we also learnt how fragile eggs can be.

When it was time to go back to class it was my turn to hold. I basically put put the egg in my pocket and held it back to class. As I took it out of my pocket I saw it cracking Omari was fired up at me, he was so angry it is like he was asset with the egg.

What I think about the egg friend race is it was interesting on how you can balance eggs on a spoon.

I had a lot of fun with Omariz JR. Omari won’t even put him in the bin I said to him “ it is just an egg why can’t you cook it.” And that was the egg story.

My Recount Rubric
Recount Writing

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2
3
4
Write for my reader
I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose
I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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Introduction
My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction
wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics
My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.



Tuesday, 15 September 2015

problem solving 11

Walt: identify and solve number patterns.

Market day

WALT: write an interesting and detailed recount.

Last week on Friday we had our own team 4 market. We had made our own customized product to sell at the market. I could not wait till it was the market to make money and buy stuff with it like food, Loom bands, bookmarks Door hangers and more customized.

We had 6 Trade and Enterprise Groups and they are Kitchen, custom stationery, jewels and accessories,
Home ware, music and toys. I was in the group called custom stationery I made door hangers and managed to raise $19.60. Our door hangers were only $1.50 you can also make your own.
I had lots of  fun doing it.

Setting up and getting ready for the market was a heap lot of work to put into our products and setting up for the week 8 market. We could barely wait to make money and buy different stuff like hot chips, loom bands and more stuff with that money. We had used 1 full size table and displayed all have our stuff we gave all our orders to the people that ordered it and even had generic ones in case people want to buy it.

It had been the first time a had done business in selling my product others. My experiences in selling were making customers happy and making them feel welcome to buy our products. I also liked cooperating and  making money as well as having fun with others.

What experiences i had in buying other people’s products was a big feast for me i had nearly bought every one's product from each business group. I had bought candles,hot chips, and five cold popsicles and shared it with my friends. I had also bought from my own business group I had lots have fun buying and eating.

My thoughts about the market was amazing it was the best thing that happened in the school. I had lots of fun.


Recount Writing

1
2
3
4

Write for my reader

I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.

My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.

Purpose

I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose

The message is clear in some parts of the recount.

My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.

Introduction

My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.

My introduction wows my reader!

Paragraph

Topics

My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.

I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.

My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.


My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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Task Description: Today I had written a recount about the team 4 market day i have written all the paragraphs have the sequences in order in what happens first than second and on and on.  I had bought heaps of stuff to eat and 
wear . hope you enjoy my writing. please leave a comment below if you like it.

Wednesday, 9 September 2015

Poems

Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjective 
    Chocolate
                Melting, yummy
               Sweet,hard,warm,
                        filled

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Today we learnt how to write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjective to make it interesting. My goal 
is to hook the reader into  reading my poem check out my other poems and keep in touch. If you like
my poem please leave a comment.

                         

                 

Tuesday, 8 September 2015

Poem 5

WALT : Write poems using interesting nouns, adverbs, adjectives and verb


Disturbing
Dogs
Dines
Delightfully


 
Today we learnt how to write poems using interesting nouns, adverbs, adjectives and verb 
Have a look at the poem above.

Wednesday, 2 September 2015

Adverbs

WALT: We are learning about adverbs and how to use them effectively.


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Today we wrote short sentences Using Adverbs and also learnt how to use them
effectively in many ways. Some of them are how, there and when one of my
sentences are The soccer player sweated hard. have a check at the
presentation, don't forget to leave a comment if you like it.


Tuesday, 1 September 2015

Poem 1

Walt: use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text


                                                      
In the Early sunny Midday.
I see a _______
hopping up and down.
                          
                    big and dangerous


               and kicks with it’s two feet.

It has a pouch right in the middle for its baby

Monday, 31 August 2015

Friday, 28 August 2015

Job Application

I will like to take part in  teacher dish duties. I am available in the mornings and afternoons. I want the job because i am interested in doing all my chorus at home except for toilet cleaning it  s a bummer doing it. i am good at this job because if i can clean dishes i can take my teachers dishes. I would like to take part in the teacher dishes because i do not wan’t to sit in a toilet scrubbing and cleaning it all day. Hello Muba’s butler Bob the builder i think Mubashshir will be great for this job called teacher duties he does dishes faster than my mum watching tv and cooking. I think this will Be a great job for him.

By: Muba

Thursday, 27 August 2015

Team 4 Traid fair

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.This term our school topic is trade and enterprise, as part of this topic on week four team 4 had our very own trade fair. We had to make our own group presentation to share to the rest of  team 4, in my group is Lomio and Moroni. The trade fair was awesome can’t wait for the Team 4 market . Trading means  the goodes and the services and enterprise means a project or undertaking, especially a bold or complex one. The trade fair is kind of  like a market but it is where you get your orders done to purchase your product on the market day. The trade fair is also a trade exhibition to order as many things you want to buy, but you need to have money to buy it. The Trade Exhibition Is Usually where mostly people order their stuff.

There are 6 unusual group and they are Homeware, Toys, Kitchen, Jewelry, Custom stationery and Music. Homeware are making house hold stuff that people could buy and use at home and one of them are soap who would not want to buy soap.Toys , Toys basically make toys like a  gun or a car. Kitchen makes cakes and more yum stuff. I am in the group of  custom stationery and I am making door hanger so far we have managed to get 5 orders we are really trying to get more orders.


In my trade fair experience I had the most coolest ever at school i had to order a lot of stuff, And then I had gotten a little angry at my teammates because they left the whole ordering table to me to look after but it all came down to a happy trade fair. We managed to raise $11.50pt. That much money is enough for me to buy myself 1 new soccer ball.


I can’t wait for the market it is going to be filled with kids. Making our order it was all technology that help us. What we basically did was open a new presentation and share with my team mates. Then make a door hanger template to see which is the best template for the people.