Thursday, 22 October 2015

San Diego Intro 2

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Today Mr Goodwin said we are going to the San Diego zoo. But we didn't go to San Diego zoo, we actually went on a virtual tour of the zoo, which was kind of boring. Are there as many animals at the real 
zoo as their was on the zoo website?

Today we had written two paragraphs that hook the reader into our story.
We had written a complex sentence
a simple and a complex question.
hope you enjoy.

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