My Amazing superhero writing

WALT:  write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favourite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If I was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min.

I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because

it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

If I had super powers  it will have to be speed because whenever I play my favorite sport soccer Without killing them I can just zoom through them that they won’t even notice I have just scored a goal. If i was late to school and only have 4 minutes left i can just zoom through the road, up the hill and through the gate without being tired and have my breakfast on the way. I think super speed is super cool so i can beat usain bolt and be in the movie flash.  

My speed  capability would feel like I have just come out of the galaxy . Speed capability would look like a Thunder striking on the rock bottom ground.  My super powers is speed whenever you're late to your game dash hard out and you will be there by 1 min. I would use my super capability to save people's  life when death strikes like a earthquake or a tornado,it will be my job to look after New Zealand. If i had my speed capability i will use them on villains and burning house to get people to shelter as instantly as possible. “I will save New Zealand!!”.

I think having Speed ability is cool because you don’t have to care about getting to school on time. I think having superpowers is awesome because it help’s you with a lot have stuff in the future. Super power’s are intensely fun.

Discription:

Today we learnt how to write effective paragraph's using juicy word's. Me and my class had to write about our favourite super power's, my favourite super power was speed I chose speed because it is fun and cool. At the end of our writing session we had to partner up my partner is Omari then what we did each others and was read each others writing , after that we had been given a rubric witch is on the top we had to mark each others.

What we learnt was to write juicy words by refracting with a partner  Here is a link to Wikipedia all about speed https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Speed.

Rubric by : Omari