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Thursday 3 July 2014

superhero writing


firekick pet name  H.G.F (Humongous gun flash)

Do you know who is Humongous sword killer is ?

Humongous Sword Killer is a famous superhero, well his real name is Jack (Jack cevan).  He is 22 year’s old. He does one workout a day and has become very strong. He has humongous bomb’s and kills bad people. Did you know that Jack has a pet called Humongous Gun  Flash. He is strong like Jack.



Jack  was walking  to countdown to buy him a drink half way through he saw a ugly man his name was Humpty Dumpty , “he was so ugly that he always could not stop putting traps in his own house”. So what Humpty Dumpty did was tell jack to come in his house, but before Jack came in, he got transformed into Humongous Sword Killer.



After a wild humpty dumpty Just disappeared Jack knew he set traps “ hahahahaha” Jack nearly fell but lucky he was a giant. The tiles were falling so fast  that he could slip off After  when Jack  completed the level he got chain and locked in a big jail gate.



After a wild Humongous Gun Flash broke the door and helped get Humpty Dumpty.  A little wild later Jack and H.G.F couldn't find Humpty Dumpty. After 5.00 min they saw Humpty Dumpty running into the cage  and got stuck.



After an hour  the police came and arrested and was never to be seen again  he might get banned for using traps. Next time Humpty Dumpty will learn his lesson And Jack saved the day .
      
 
 
 
 
 
 

Planning: 
Personality/ Motivation: Humongous sword killer,Jack cevan,22,  (Lots of different swords and humongous bombs 
and guns)  work at a gun shop 
Jack  was walking  to countdown to bu

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