WALT: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
Last week Thursday me and my class went to omaru creek. Many years ago the creek use to be speck and span, now it is like brown dirty mud and full of rubbish. What could you do for Omaru creek?
Today we were asked to write about omaru creek and how it is smelly and can effect animals under the water. This introduction is about the river talks.
Today we were asked to write about omaru creek and how it is smelly and can effect animals under the water. This introduction is about the river talks.
I think the creek plaoshon does effect the anamal's that live in it and the anamal's that lives around it
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