WALT: write an interesting and detailed recount.
Last week on Friday we had our own team 4 market. We had made our own customized product to sell at the market. I could not wait till it was the market to make money and buy stuff with it like food, Loom bands, bookmarks Door hangers and more customized.
We had 6 Trade and Enterprise Groups and they are Kitchen, custom stationery, jewels and accessories,
Home ware, music and toys. I was in the group called custom stationery I made door hangers and managed to raise $19.60. Our door hangers were only $1.50 you can also make your own.
I had lots of fun doing it.
Setting up and getting ready for the market was a heap lot of work to put into our products and setting up for the week 8 market. We could barely wait to make money and buy different stuff like hot chips, loom bands and more stuff with that money. We had used 1 full size table and displayed all have our stuff we gave all our orders to the people that ordered it and even had generic ones in case people want to buy it.
It had been the first time a had done business in selling my product others. My experiences in selling were making customers happy and making them feel welcome to buy our products. I also liked cooperating and making money as well as having fun with others.
What experiences i had in buying other people’s products was a big feast for me i had nearly bought every one's product from each business group. I had bought candles,hot chips, and five cold popsicles and shared it with my friends. I had also bought from my own business group I had lots have fun buying and eating.
My thoughts about the market was amazing it was the best thing that happened in the school. I had lots of fun.
Write for my reader
I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction wows my reader!
My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
Task Description: Today I had written a recount about the team 4 market day i have written all the paragraphs have the sequences in order in what happens first than second and on and on. I had bought heaps of stuff to eat and
wear . hope you enjoy my writing. please leave a comment below if you like it.